Monday, February 18, 2013

Peer Review II

  1.  Reread the Introduction, and label the following characteristics.If they're not present, note that for your partner.
    1.  thesis statement.
    2. What process is being described
    3. Why is the process important
    4. What background information is provide
How can the intro be improved? 
  1. Reread the conclusion, and label the following characteristics:
    1. paraphrased thesis statement
    2. positive/ending note
How can the conclusion be improved?
  1. What pattern of organization does the essay use? Is it clear/effective?
  2. Underline transition words. Are there enough, too many, not enough?
  3. Does each body paragraph have a clear topic sentence?Label them for each body paragraph. Does the topic sentence clearly introduce the process?

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